30 Second Draft

This is a draft of the first sequence of my video for the College TV channel DGTV. All I was really trying to do here was to get some idea of what the video would look like if I added a banner with my shows logo on at the bottom of the video. I still have to go through the useful footage that I compiled and cut little sections like the sound in this video.
But any comments left will be read and taken into consideration for the production of my final edit.